Another chapter with only minor changes, as I found there was nothing in this chapter that I didn't like on re-reading it. Cerise will get a little more space later on, but this chapter wasn't the place to do that.

So, a while ago now Legendbringer announced that he was going back through the early chapters of Fall of Starfleet and sprucing them up a bit, touching them up, adding some new stuff, all that sort of thing.

At the time I commented that I probably ought to do the same thing, but I never actually did anything about it.

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For a long time I wanted to include a Macbeth homage in Starfleet Nemesis where Grand Ruler would be confronted with Twilight's ghost and forced to confront his own guilt and his part in her death while his loyal lords and officers look on in bewilderment.

And now that I'm rewriting whole chapters I finally got to do it, as I replaced the gladiators bit in the banquet scene (which was supposed to lead into a subplot, but didn't) and replaced it with this:

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Two more chapters of Starfleet Nemesis updated. The changes to Sunset's Game are quite low-key, and mainly revolve around Luna and Sunset's interaction. The changes to Setting Out include a better look at Rainbow's feelings, and a small but quite important new scene.

Please check it out.

So, when I said I was going to give Starfleet Nemesis my undivided attention...

Marching Orders, the first proper chapter of the fic, has been updated as Starla continues to be awful but hopefully in a more relatable way that she was before we could see into her head. She's still the bad guy, but I'm going for a bit less 'jackass' and a bit more 'tragic flaws' this time around. Kind of, anyway.

So check that out.

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